Through the Mist

A Poem By Alecia // 4/14/2009

It's a cold misty morning,
The sun is just rising,
She walks through the grass,
She walks in the dawn,
She stops by a rose bush,
She plucks a red rose,
As she smells,
The flowers sweetness,
Tears come to her eyes.
Looking at the rising sun,
She begins to cry.
Thinking of the bitter life she's led,
Thinking of her troubles,
Another sigh is heaved,
Another tear is shed.
A hand is laid upon her shoulder,
A comforting word said,
Her love has returned to her,
Her world has come to life again.
No more tears fall,
No more sighs heaved.
Her love has come back to her,
In the misty dawn

Comments

It reminds me of Pride and

It reminds me of Pride and Prejudice. The new one with Kiera Knightly. It's really pretty, and I like the way you wrote it.

"Courage is being scared to death and saddling up anyway." - John Wayne

Bridget | Thu, 04/16/2009

"I always wonder why birds stay in the same place when they can fly anywhere on the earth. Then I ask myself the same question." - Harun Yahya

Thank you. Actually I was

Thank you. Actually I was thinking about that when I wrote this. Great movie.

"Borrowed, borrowed without permission. But with every intension of returning?" Jack Sparrow

Alecia | Thu, 04/16/2009

It awoke with a shrill shreak that can be trnaslated "How dare you leave me in this bed, when I am asleep and helpless?" My sister

loverly:)

Very good, dear! I was seeing Pride and Prudjudice too, but with a couple different tweeks of my own imagination:)
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Ariel | Fri, 04/17/2009

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"To produce a mighty book, you must choose a mighty theme. No great and enduring volume can ever be written on the flea, though many there be that have tried it." -- Herman Melville

Bravo

Wow, you surprised me with this one. And you said you weren't a poem person. Good job, child. Good job.

"...And I'm Lukas, his evil spawn." my brother introducing himself, after my dad.

The Brit | Fri, 04/17/2009

Your not good at

Your not good at poems...ha!
Brit your quote made me laugh SO hard...maybe it's because I know the evil person :) HAHAHAHAHA
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"Yes, words are useless! Gobble-gobble-gobble-gobble-gobble! Too much of it, darling, too much! That is why I show you my work! That is why you are here!" --Edna Mode (the Incredibles)

Ariel | Sat, 04/18/2009

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"To produce a mighty book, you must choose a mighty theme. No great and enduring volume can ever be written on the flea, though many there be that have tried it." -- Herman Melville

Occasionally I am able to

Occasionally I am able to concoct something good, and call it a poem.
Yes, ha ha. Lovely quote. Makes me laugh.

"Borrowed, borrowed without permission. But with every intension of returning?" Jack Sparrow

Alecia | Sat, 04/18/2009

It awoke with a shrill shreak that can be trnaslated "How dare you leave me in this bed, when I am asleep and helpless?" My sister

Your concoction turned out

Your concoction turned out very nicely. I was also picturing Pride and Pejudice. Very nice indeed.

"Here are the beauties which pierce like swords or burn like cold iron." C.S.Lewis

airlia | Wed, 04/29/2009

"It is foolish and wrong to mourn the men who died. Rather we should thank God such men lived."
General George S. Patton

Thank you, and I am

Thank you, and I am regretting saying that. So if would, block that out, I never said it.
Thanks for reading it.

"Borrowed, borrowed without permission. But with every intension of returning?" Jack Sparrow

Alecia | Wed, 04/29/2009

It awoke with a shrill shreak that can be trnaslated "How dare you leave me in this bed, when I am asleep and helpless?" My sister

Wow, Alecia, this is

Wow, Alecia, this is beautiful. And you say you aren't a poet???

It reminds me of P&P too. [Sorry if you're tired of people saying that, but I had to point it out. :D]

Job well done. :)

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Just be sure to check all the wardrobes.

Clare Marie | Thu, 04/30/2009

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"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve." -Bilbo Baggins [The Lord of the Rings]

Thank you. You know, I never

Thank you. You know, I never saw that you commented. P&P, that's fine. I really don't mind. It's what was being pictured when I wrote it, so it makes me feel like I accomplished what I set out to.

"Welcome to the land of little orange fruit." The Brit-some comment somewhere, welcoming someone.

Alecia | Fri, 05/15/2009

It awoke with a shrill shreak that can be trnaslated "How dare you leave me in this bed, when I am asleep and helpless?" My sister

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