It is Dawn

A Poem By Bernadette // 1/12/2009

Breaking through the horizons
With golden rays of haze
Sparkling the dew, and glinting
Upon the waters
Sloping rain drenched plains
Casting yellow rays unto the hills
Mountains tall, shadows in morn
The sky is majestic
As the birds sing

Golden-green shines in the leaves
Forest dark is lightened by fire
And the creatures stir
The shadows blown away
The fresh winds come
The brightness blinds
As it blushes in the clouds
Something comes over dark fields
It is dawn

Comments

wow

Absolutely beautiful! The imagery was amazing, I could see it all so clearly. I love it!
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"It is not death that makes us understand one another, but poetry."
--Lavinia

Hannah W. | Wed, 01/14/2009

That was lovely! "Bubbles

That was lovely!

"Bubbles are decieving." Kendra about a root beer float

The Brit | Wed, 01/14/2009

Oh, I love this,

Oh, I love this, Bernadette...it's really beautiful.
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"Elves and Dragons! Cabbages and potatoes are better for me and you. Don't go getting mixed up in the business of your betters, or you'll land in trouble too big for you." — Hamfast Gamgee (the Gaffer)

Clare Marie | Wed, 01/14/2009

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"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve." -Bilbo Baggins [The Lord of the Rings]

"Forest dark is lightened by

"Forest dark is lightened by fire" was my favorite line.
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He who is near to his Captain is sure to be a target for the archers.
-Amy Carmichael

Anna | Wed, 01/14/2009

I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right. --The Book Thief

Wonderful!!

Lovely, beautiful.

Elizabeth | Fri, 01/16/2009

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The Holy Spirit is the quiet guest of our soul." -St. Augustine

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