Rush

A Poem By Bernadette // 5/14/2012

Why does a gale rush past
like thoughts in my mind,
or a freight train
running through the dusk and the dawn?

Comments

I like this, even though it

I like this, even though it is short... It feels like either a beginning, or an end of something.

Hannah W. | Tue, 05/15/2012

I like it too!

I like it too! It definitely feels like the end of something to me.

Tamerah | Wed, 05/16/2012

I'd love to see a longer

I'd love to see a longer version with this at the end.

Anna | Wed, 05/16/2012

I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right. --The Book Thief

Nice!

Very nice, Bernadette! This is how I feel very often.... I can definately relate!

Elizabeth | Wed, 05/16/2012

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The Holy Spirit is the quiet guest of our soul." -St. Augustine

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