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Sea so Deep
The night so fair
Wind so cool
Deep waves of sea
Flow ever on
The stars glimmer
Spreading brightness
On deep blue sea
Reflects
Fair moon
Above the sea
The sky, the sea
Deep blue
Rushing sound
Of waves
Gusting
Wind
The wave’s lapping shore
Tide pulls in
As sun rises
Over peaks
Of blue seas
Shall endure the morn.
filed under: moon | morning | night. | Sea | wind
I love this! It was beautiful. You did a wonderful job. :) It makes me ache even more to be at the ocean, though!
Bernadette,
You are getting to be a really good writer. I love this poem...
Very Nice! Beautifuly written!!!!!!!! I love the way the poem flows and your descriptions.
Well, if you've read anything of mine you'd know how much I love water, rain, the sea, and anything dealing with water! I really like this!!!!!!!
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Ricky was L but he has the flu,
Lizzie was O but she homework to do,
Mitchell was E but probably got lost on the way,
So I'm all of love that could make it today.
-Shel Silverstien
Good job! I love the descriptions and the meter of the poem.
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