into the day

A poem by Brianna | 10/5/2007

Feel the sun
shine
on your face
warming you
filling this place
cold with dew
from a foggy night

Feel your legs
stretch
as you race
across the wide and
grassy space
rushing quickly
speeding forth

Feel the wind
pull
through your hair
dancing about you
telling its dare
whispering new
pushing forth

Feel your heart
skip
racing on
setting something
within you free
letting you see
into the day

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| Sun, 10/07/2007 - 8:46am

That's beautiful, Brianna!

Velocity | Wed, 10/10/2007 - 9:56pm

Good job!
Thats nice.

Sarah H | Fri, 10/12/2007 - 3:16pm

Yes. That was absolutley wonderful.

Brianna | Fri, 10/12/2007 - 10:15pm

Thank you everyone for the comments. :)