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A Poem By Brianna // 4/15/2008

At the end now
falling down now
giving up now
all for you

Changed and broken
left and shaken
now awakened
to your love

Peace has washed me
clean of worry
all of me
is all for you, and
one day coming
I'll come running
home

Comments

Beautiful! I see the Father

Beautiful! I see the Father with open arms waiting.
I am Madeline L.'s Omie

Anonymous | Wed, 04/16/2008

:)

I like the hurried feel, which you have gotten quite good at. :)

Timothy | Thu, 04/17/2008

:)

It's beautiful, Brianna. The flow is stunning and flawless. Good work.

Aisling | Mon, 04/21/2008

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Thanks guys. =)

Brianna | Tue, 04/22/2008

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"We have been created for greater things. Why stoop down to things that will spoil the beauty of our hearts?" ~Mother Theresa

Beautiful!

Beutifully written!

Elizabeth | Fri, 04/25/2008

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The Holy Spirit is the quiet guest of our soul." -St. Augustine

:)

Nice poem :)

Velocity | Fri, 05/16/2008

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The Truth will set you free.