Don't stop the rain

A Poem By Bridget // 4/2/2014

Finally, it comes
and I can breathe again
even with the world crashing around me
and terror towering above.
Clarity of sky brings clarity of mind - take it away:
the lovely blue sky
fading at the edge
and then the sun, pure pure white
and blazing with all the colors in the universe - let me forget,
let my thoughts fuzz around the edges like bad reception.
I love the brilliance
but right now I am happy to let it rain
with the soft water grazing my cheeks and tickling the roots of my hair.
It's almost done now
the deadly glow pushing against the clouds.
The light is beautiful but please
I beg you
don't stop the rain.

Comments

This is beautiful. The

This is beautiful. The imagery is lovely, and the words are really well arranged - I like it very much. : )

Hannah D. | Thu, 04/03/2014

"Reason itself is a matter of faith. It is an act of faith to assert that our thoughts have any relation to reality at all." - G. K. Chesterton

:)

Lovely. Just lovely.

Maddi | Sat, 04/05/2014

Goodbye? Oh no, please. Can’t we just go back to page one and start all over again?” – Winnie The Pooh

This is wonderful :)

This is wonderful :)

Erin | Tue, 04/29/2014

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

Breathtaking!

Your wording was really splendid in this poem, I really loved the rolling rhythme it had! Love!

Kassady | Tue, 04/29/2014

"Here's looking at you, Kid"
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Write On!

Thank you all, ladies; I'm

Thank you all, ladies; I'm amazed at how much everyone has loved this. :)

Bridget | Sat, 05/17/2014

"I always wonder why birds stay in the same place when they can fly anywhere on the earth. Then I ask myself the same question." - Harun Yahya

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