Old poetry that, in a fit of madness, I deleted.

A Poem By Bridget // 11/20/2010

Alright, so this is some old stuff I posted, but for some reason, I deleted it.  Don't ask me why; I think that was back when I thought it was ridiculous.  Anyway, I'm posting it again, and here it is.

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Exhilaration
 
Running headlong

Into disaster

The wind tangles my hair

Muscles clenching

Feet pounding

There they are

Here I am

Kill me if you can

Living in disaster

I've never been happier

 

 

 

Back In Remember
 
Remember.

I don't want to go there;

Too much pain to bear.

Remember.

Where have I been

In the realm of Back Then?

Remember.

I danced the Dance of Pain.

I'll never be the same.

Remember?

You tried so hard to say

That there would be another day.

The way I slapped your face and screamed

And in my dreams I dreamed

That you meant it.

But you didn't.

Remember?

Somehow I'm back in Remember.

 

 

 

Of Forever
 
I feel I will die.

This land, where am I?

In the depths of the heart

Of forever
I want someone to care.

But nobody's there

In the caverns of dark

Of forever.
How do I start

To look for my heart?

It's lost in the world

Of forever.

Comments

Hmm....

I really like the feelings of these (if you understand my meaning).

My personal favorite was Back in Remember but that might be because it rym's :/ ... Sorry i'm not much help when it comes to unryming poems, lol. But I think they all are good! Why ever did you through them away!

Good job!

Write on!

Kassady | Thu, 12/30/2010

"Here's looking at you, Kid"
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Write On!

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