Autumn

A Poem By Clare Marie // 2/27/2008

The pretty leaves come floating down
Upon the chilly breeze,
Reminding me of butterflies
Dancing with the bees.

The trees are all a red, orange and gold;
Nature's firework display.
Splashes of color shine brilliantly
Around me as I play.

But all too soon the snow comes down;
The trees all lose their sheen.
At least in my mind I have secure
A gorgeous Autumn scene.

Comments

oooo!!

I love the pretty little picture it paints in my mind! Job well done! :)
~eMiLy~

Emily | Wed, 02/27/2008

Thanks!!!

Thanks!!!

Clare Marie | Thu, 02/28/2008

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"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve." -Bilbo Baggins [The Lord of the Rings]

Wonderful job

Dear Clare,

Wonderful writing! Beautiful! I love it!

Elizabeth

Elizabeth | Thu, 02/28/2008

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The Holy Spirit is the quiet guest of our soul." -St. Augustine

Thanks, Elizabeth!!

Thanks, Elizabeth!!

Clare Marie | Thu, 02/28/2008

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"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve." -Bilbo Baggins [The Lord of the Rings]

Well done...

I'll be waiting for winter, spring, and summer.

Ezra | Thu, 02/28/2008

"There are no great men of God. There are only pitiful, sorry men whose God is great beyond measure." - Paul Washer [originally Jonathan Edwards]

=)

Very nice, Clare.

Brianna | Fri, 02/29/2008

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"We have been created for greater things. Why stoop down to things that will spoil the beauty of our hearts?" ~Mother Theresa

thanks guys

Thanks, all of you!!!

Anonymous | Fri, 02/29/2008

oops

Whoops! I think I posted the above as a comment, not a reply. Thanks!!!

Clare Marie | Tue, 03/04/2008

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"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve." -Bilbo Baggins [The Lord of the Rings]

aaagh...

I realized that I posted my apology twice, so now I have to edit this one so there aren't two of them. I am so bad with computers!!!

Clare Marie | Tue, 03/04/2008

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"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve." -Bilbo Baggins [The Lord of the Rings]

Love it!!!!

I LOVE IT CLARE!!!!! It was great! You are a Really good wrighter.

Angela | Thu, 07/17/2008

OH YO YO
☺~Ang☺

thank you

Thanks Angela!!
Welcome to Apricotpie!! I think you'll like it here. :)

Clare Marie | Thu, 07/17/2008

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"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve." -Bilbo Baggins [The Lord of the Rings]

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