
*Hey-this is a song I wrote randomly. My birthday is tomorrow on the 27th of September! Thought I'd mention it. Anyway, hope y'all like it! It's really short. Constructive comments are appreciated.*
The world spins quickly around me, I feel so lost
It's going around in circle after circle, it makes my head spin to think of what you did. What you did to me, what you did to him.
Chorus:
Why? Why do you do these things?
Why? Why do you make me hurt?
Why do you make me burn? Oh..Why.
That is my question.
Why?
I totally agree with you, Emily. I'm a crappy song writer, but I felt like doing something! Thanks for being nice =]
Thanks to both you and Anna too!!!!
-Falling Leaves
"If life gives you lemons, throw them back!" -Joe Jonas (I think, or it might be another one of the AWESOME Jonas Brothers)
OMG! That's like my favorite quote! And yes it is from Joe [my personal favorite]!!!
No, you're not a crappy song writer! AndI liked it like a lot!
~E~
Thanks! And yeah, the Jonas Brothers are awesometistical. I personally like Nick =]
-Falling Leaves
"If life gives you lemons, throw them back!" -Joe Jonas (I think, or it might be another one of the AWESOME Jonas Brothers)
I think I'll put a Joe quote on my thingy! [that is, if you don't want me to for some odd "You stole my idea!" thing...LOL!]
~E~
Lol! I actually found it on another writing forum.
-Falling Leaves
"If life gives you lemons, throw them back!" -Joe Jonas (I think, or it might be another one of the AWESOME Jonas Brothers)
It could use some work but I like what you were going for. I might sound mean and it is totally not intentional, but it just happens that I LOVE writing songs. But the problem with posting them is I like the song when I write it but then a week later I don't. But I think you could make this a cool song if you put some music to it! =]
Best of luck!
~E~