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Fiction By I am Nate-Dude // 12/11/2008

Introduction: A matoran (Ma-Tor-ann.) is a person from Lego’s Bionicle. They average 3-5 feet tall and are clad with amore. They have masks they wear , which if you take off will make them pass-out. If you don’t know much about Bionicle this may be confusing.

Mazeka awoke from his slumber. Today he would be going to the shipping yard to see what the Le-Matoran would bring today. He got off his bed and walk over to his table. Opening a drawer, he pulled out his dagger and a light stone. “I wonder why it’s so dark today?” He thought. As he opened the door of his hut, he was hit hard by cold, stinging and swirling snow. “Wow, some storm!” This was not uncommon to him though, for being a ko-matoran (a matoran who lives in cold climates )he was use to ice and snow. He walk past the village square which had a fire burning in an beautifully decorated doom, and headed down the road that lead to the shipping yard. It took a while to get there because of the storm but at least he made it. Walking to the docking platform, he noticed that many other matoran had taken the same, rare and very occasional time off he did. “Hay Mazeka!” Said anther named kryztan(Crys-tan). Mazeka turned and answered: “Hay, what did the le-matoran bring?” Kryztan pointed at all the cargo, saying nothing, for ko-matoran save their breath for breathing. But then he added “and some news. Bad news!” “Bad News?” thought Mazeka. He push his way through the small crowd, passing kohlii balls, light stones, spears and even little stone carvings. He pushed two other matoran out of the way, though he could have gone around them, and came mask-to-mask with a le-matoran called Keanoko(key-no-ko). “What’s this I hear about news?” The matoran of air didn’t look happy as he took the last box of supplies off his crab. “Ta-Koro (a Koro is a village,) tells we of the deepwood, that Makuta Gorast has been eye-sighted ever-near the fire-spitter’s koro.” The le- matoran speak a form of slang called “tree-talk” or “chute talk” depending which island you lived on. Keanoko was no exception. “So the matoran of fire say Gorast has been hanging out near their koro?” Thought Mazeka, almost out loud. He had heard of her, Makuta were the most villainess species of anything that had a mind. They’re smart, powerful, and very, very bad. Gorast, being a female, was a rare Makuta indeed. All the stories of her were bad, each worst than the last. Some were just downright revolting. Mazeka’s best friend was a ta-matoran, (If you haven’t guessed yet, Ta means fire, Ko means ice and le means air.) and he wonder if he had been hurt, or if the whole Gorast thing was even true. Quickly he made-up his mind to do something that most matoran seldom ever do: travel.
To be continued…


Very well written!!! I can

Very well written!!! I can see how you like those things. Glad you put this up:):):)

Ariel | Fri, 12/12/2008

"To produce a mighty book, you must choose a mighty theme. No great and enduring volume can ever be written on the flea, though many there be that have tried it." -- Herman Melville

oh thanks

Oh thanks dude.
Just so everyone knows, this story and all next parts to it, aren't very acierate to the bionicle story. I'm just wrighting about the parts it doesn't talk about. I'm not sure if all the ko,ta, and le-matoran live apart, or if they call their villages koros. But they do on other islands.

I am Nate-Dude | Fri, 12/12/2008


Hey, Nate-Dude!!!

HI! Sorry I haven't ever read this before! But now that I have, I am glad that I did! This is very well written!!!

Kendra | Sun, 07/12/2009

"Are you sure this water is sanitary? It looks questionable to me! But what about bacteria?"--Tantor the elephant from Tarzan.

Could it be? Kenny G.? YIPPY!

Could it be? Kenny G.? YIPPY! you read it! Yay!

I am Nate-Dude | Sun, 07/12/2009


It is....

It is I!!!! At last! I read your story. I go to do some more reading!!!! Farewell for now, but I am sure you will be "hearing" from me quite soon!

Kendra | Sun, 07/12/2009

"Are you sure this water is sanitary? It looks questionable to me! But what about bacteria?"--Tantor the elephant from Tarzan.


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