The seasons

A Poem By Joseph // 5/4/2009

When the spring rain comes
crashing down
when the summer wind
blows through my hair
when the autumn leaves
fall to the ground
and the winter snow
blows through the trees
grace comes upon me,
and I thank God.

Comments

Hi!

Hi Joseph! welcome to apricotpie. it's great to have you! I love your poem!!!
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"Jesus is like Tide. He washes away what others leave behind." Anonymous

Tori | Mon, 05/04/2009

“Oh Ronnie! I can’t believe you’re a prefect! That’s everyone in the family!” said Mrs. Weasley.
“What are Fred and I, next-door neighbors?”
–George Weasley

Hmm. Your poem sounds like

Hmm. Your poem sounds like it was written by someone older than seven. It's really good; I like it. Welcome to AP!

"Oh lovely snowball, packed with care
Smack a head that's unaware.
Then with freezing ice to spare
Melt and soak through underwear!
Fly straight and true, hit hard and square.
This, oh snowball, is my prayer." - Calvin, from Calvin and Hobbes

Bridget | Mon, 05/04/2009

"I always wonder why birds stay in the same place when they can fly anywhere on the earth. Then I ask myself the same question." - Harun Yahya

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It's so great to have you on Joseph. I like your poem. :)

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"When God takes something from your grasp, He's not punishing you, but merely opening your hands to receive something better and more amazing."

Mairead | Mon, 05/04/2009

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"Sweet is the love that never knew a wound, but deeper that which died and rose again." - Mother Mary Francis

:D

Joseph, it's darling! I'm so proud of you!!

Aisling | Mon, 05/04/2009

This was really well done,

This was really well done, Joseph. Awesome job!
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If I disappear, and you cannot find me, please don't worry.
Just be sure to check all the wardrobes.

Clare Marie | Mon, 05/04/2009

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"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve." -Bilbo Baggins [The Lord of the Rings]

How many people do you know

How many people do you know who can write this great a poem at only seven?! This would be a good poem at any age. Good job with that, sunny youth (I like to call people "sunny youths", just to let you know). And welcome...glad to have you...come right in...and all that good, hospitable stuff.

Hey, you people sound like you know him personally; raise your hand if you know (personally) this sunny youth...or we could call him a lad...I like that too...

"...Now you've heard of the French Nation, and the British Nation....Well this, is the Imagin Nation." Kris Kringle (Miracle on 34th Street)

The Brit | Mon, 05/04/2009

Lovely, this is really

Lovely, this is really nice!

~Erin~

"Well Adam, the bad news is we're running out of time, the good news is I'm going to be the only one talking. Words aren't necessary but I would like to give you a standing ovation." -Simon Cowell, Mad World. ONCE IN A LIFETIME!!

E | Mon, 05/04/2009

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

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Joseph, this was really impressive. You're already budding into an awesome writer!

Brianna | Tue, 05/05/2009

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"We have been created for greater things. Why stoop down to things that will spoil the beauty of our hearts?" ~Mother Theresa

Joseph, that was awesome!

Joseph, that was awesome!

Sarah Bethany | Tue, 05/05/2009

Well Done!

If you're writing like this now, it's only a matter of time before you become the next Robert Louis Stevenson.

James | Tue, 05/05/2009

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"The idea that we should approach science without a philosophy is itself a philosophy... and a bad one, because it is self-refuting." -- Dr. Jason Lisle

:O

WOW! This is remarkable! Ditto what James said.
Welcome to AP!
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"Yes, words are useless! Gobble-gobble-gobble-gobble-gobble! Too much of it, darling, too much! That is why I show you my work! That is why you are here!" --Edna Mode (the Incredibles)

Ariel | Wed, 05/06/2009

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"To produce a mighty book, you must choose a mighty theme. No great and enduring volume can ever be written on the flea, though many there be that have tried it." -- Herman Melville

You're only seven!? WOW!

You're only seven!? WOW! This is really good.
Welcome, welcome.

"Borrowed, borrowed without permission. But with every intension of returning?" Jack Sparrow

Alecia | Thu, 05/07/2009

It awoke with a shrill shreak that can be trnaslated "How dare you leave me in this bed, when I am asleep and helpless?" My sister

You make me smile

Joseph, I treasure every word...Welcome to the world of writing...

Godmother Rachel

Anonymous | Thu, 05/07/2009

This is soooooo good!

This is sooooo awesome!!! Welcome to Apricotpie!! I loved every word!!!!

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"Out of doubt, out of dark to the day's rising,
I came singing in the sun, sword unsheathing.
To hope's end I rode and to heart's breaking:
Now for wrath, now for ruin and a red nightfall!"
~Return of the King

Elizabeth | Thu, 05/07/2009

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The Holy Spirit is the quiet guest of our soul." -St. Augustine

It's amazing you're only 7.

This is GREAT! It's amazing you're only 7.

"Here are the beauties which pierce like swords or burn like cold iron." C.S.Lewis

airlia | Sat, 05/09/2009

"It is foolish and wrong to mourn the men who died. Rather we should thank God such men lived."
General George S. Patton

:)

good job, it's such a good poem!!!!!!!!

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January 1, I've got alot of things on my mind
I'm looking at my body through a new spy satellite. try to lift a finger, but I don't think I can make the call, so tell me if I move, 'cause I don't feel anything at all.

Bernadette | Thu, 05/14/2009

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Thanks everyone! :)

Joseph | Sun, 05/17/2009

Nice! So your only seven?

Nice! So your only seven? Welcome to AP! (Short for Apricot Pie.)

I am Nate-Dude | Fri, 07/10/2009

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