LOVE

A Poem By Nick // 11/23/2007

Love is a fire,
that burns forever,
and now it marks,
how long we'll be together.

Love is a tower,
but it isnt frail,
it withstands,
the fastest gale.

It brought us together,
opend the door,
and left us wanting,
so much more.

but love isnt just roses,
it could be a mine,
that blows up mid-step,
leaving you scars to hide.

Comments

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Beautifuly put!

Velocity | Mon, 11/26/2007

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The Truth will set you free.

thanx

-NICKO-thank u
i am new to the world of poetry, so little comments like that realy lift my spirits

Nick | Mon, 11/26/2007

Long Live The lords and masters of the Sith !

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thats nice.

Velocity | Tue, 11/27/2007

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The Truth will set you free.

Wow! That was beautiful!

Wow! That was beautiful! Really!

Emily-Smileygirl (not verified) | Sat, 12/01/2007

very nice. :P

very nice. :P

Sarah | Sat, 12/01/2007

"Sometimes even to live is courage."
-Seneca

Blogging away!
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Oh wow. this is amazing!

Oh wow. this is amazing! you're a really good poet! keep up the good work!!!!!!!

Tayme | Tue, 07/13/2010

lol

lol why thanks :) i appriciate it

Anonymous | Wed, 09/29/2010

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That was very pretty! But you need to work on your spelling. Don't feel critisized. I'm just really onto spelling problems.

BTW, change your profile pic.

Arya Animarus | Thu, 09/30/2010

Oh for the times when I felt invincible.

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It's appreciate, not appriciate.

Arya Animarus | Thu, 09/30/2010

Oh for the times when I felt invincible.

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