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A Poem By Paul McMillin // 11/23/2008

The mighty forest

full of life under the Sun

how mighty is God!

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Welcome to Apricotpie,

Welcome to Apricotpie, Paul!!

I love your haiku. :)
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"Ever heard of Plato, Aristotle, Socrates?...Morons."
-Vizzini

Clare Marie | Mon, 11/24/2008

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"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve." -Bilbo Baggins [The Lord of the Rings]

I like both your haikus. I

I like both your haikus.
I can never write them myself. I think the first and only haiku I ever wrote was,
"I don't know how to
Write these stupid haiku things
So it is crappy."
Yours are much more to the style of the Japanese. :)
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"The world will likely end tomorrow - unless postponed for rain." -Tamerah (on her blog)

Anna | Mon, 11/24/2008

I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right. --The Book Thief

explain.

wut does haiku mean? is it just like really short writing thingys?
hm.

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Velocity | Tue, 11/25/2008

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The Truth will set you free.

well...

a haiku is a Japenese form of poetry that usually talks about nature. It doesn't have to rhyme but it has three lines. The first line is five syllables, the second is seven, and the third is five again. So yeah. I wrote one about fire once. But it was on a napkin and I lost the napkin. lol
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Keri | Tue, 11/25/2008

Thx!

Thanks Keri! :D
ily.

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The unperfect person, in the unperfect world, surrounded by unperfect people, with an absolutely perfect God!

Velocity | Tue, 11/25/2008

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The Truth will set you free.

Nature??

I know what a haiku is I just did'nt know they usually talked about nature...

Anonymous | Thu, 12/04/2008

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