A Poem By Raine // 2/8/2012

Clock ticking

Water pouring

Feet pounding

Dishes rattling

Voices calling

Phone ringing

Car running

Dog barking

in this madness of a

weekday morning

the noise swirls--

swells like a brass band

approaching the finale

as the Dog ceases


Car begins driving

Phone stops ringing

Voices chattering

Dishes shining

Feet tapping

Water quieting

as day continues onward

to the Clock ticking


I love the rhythm in this!

I love the rhythm in this! Even though I was reading it in my head I forgot to take a breath because there weren't any periods. :P

Sarah | Wed, 02/08/2012

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I love poetry that makes you

I love poetry that makes you see the scenes or events discribes. This is a good one, Raine. :)

Kay J Fields | Fri, 02/10/2012

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