A Mysterious Jar

A Poem By Raine // 5/15/2011

 Clumsy and large on a dusty shelf

Clouded with age and cobwebs

She slumps on the narrow wooden shelf

High above eye level view


She collects spiders and dirt

One mouse tiptoes past, pausing a moment

To sniff the slumbering jar

Wandering away with lost interest


Dust collects on dust

Hiding her faded label

And she sits and slumbers

Alone in the attic




Oooh! Interesting! I llike how you explained the Jar in this very short but very discretiptive poem! I like that about this poem, its short, but you understand, and it leaves you thinking "Wow"!

Very awesome!

Write on!

Kassady | Sun, 05/15/2011

"Here's looking at you, Kid"
Write On!

I like how you refer to the

I like how you refer to the jar as she.

Anna | Mon, 05/16/2011

I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right. --The Book Thief


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