A Mysterious Jar

A Poem By Raine // 5/15/2011

 Clumsy and large on a dusty shelf

Clouded with age and cobwebs

She slumps on the narrow wooden shelf

High above eye level view

 

She collects spiders and dirt

One mouse tiptoes past, pausing a moment

To sniff the slumbering jar

Wandering away with lost interest

 

Dust collects on dust

Hiding her faded label

And she sits and slumbers

Alone in the attic

 

Comments

OOOH!

Oooh! Interesting! I llike how you explained the Jar in this very short but very discretiptive poem! I like that about this poem, its short, but you understand, and it leaves you thinking "Wow"!

Very awesome!

Write on!

Kassady | Sun, 05/15/2011

"Here's looking at you, Kid"
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Write On!

I like how you refer to the

I like how you refer to the jar as she.

Anna | Mon, 05/16/2011

I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right. --The Book Thief

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