This sad little song is the first I've ever written. As it is already morbid enough, please let your comments be kind!
Helpful criticism will be much appreciated.

From Myself
I run as fast as I can,
but still I cannot escape,
from the thought that I may have,
been the one who made all this shame,
(chorus)
Chorus:
And why am I, the one who is the loneliest creature in the earth?
Why should I, put up with this treatment, from the ones I called my friends?
Why should I, keep on living this dreary life?
When I, am so tired and scared and alone and shy and dying inside?
Why should I?
When I am weary, and all alone.
When I am weeping, but no one is here to
comfort me when I can’t see,
the good of all this pain.
(chorus)
Can’t someone see that I am suffering?
Doesn’t anyone know why I am haunted?
Why is nothing done, to save my life?
And to bring me, into the light?
(chorus)
But now I see, everything has a plan.
I survived life, not everyone has.
Everyone should be loved,
no one should go through what I have.
This pain I felt, this agony, I am not rid of it,
yet I am still free.
Death does not keep you from love,
it cannot be the end, we will meet again.
(2nd chorus)
2nd Chorus
And that is why, I am no longer the loneliest creature in the earth,
I understand, why life must be this way.
Though I’m still broken inside, I frequently cry out to You, to save me, You make me free, You save me from my agony, from myself.
Yeah, it's the most morbid song I've ever heard, actually. But, it's pretty good for a first time attempt, I think at least. :D
Your favorite lines, Anna, are also my, favorite lines. :P
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The quality of mercy is not strain'd;
It droppeth as the gentle rain from heaven
Upon the place beneath: it is twice blessed;
It blesseth him that gives, and him that takes
I like it, even if it is a little morbid. I especially like, "Though I’m still broken inside... You make me free, You save me from my agony, from myself."