A Lonely Poem

A Poem By Tamerah // 3/2/2008

These frozen nights
Are telling stories
Of dead ends and broken bones
Our dark weather
Makes us so alone
And we lament for being mislead
But it's really the morning we dread
And the good it brings
Because we still cling
To the dark.
In solitary we're sleeping
Divided we're dreaming
That things can still change
For the better
These heavy clouds
Let loose the water
That washes us away
We're praying for tomorrow
And today, we're still hoping
That things will get better
That things can still change
In spite of the weather.

Comments

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Excellent work Tamerah! A bit dreary though.*wink*
~gNat~

Nathanael | Sun, 03/02/2008

We are waiting for the long-promised invasion.
So are the fishes. ~ Winston Churchill

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Yes that is always my problem when I try and write poery, its always depressing!

Tamerah | Sun, 03/02/2008

Well, I wouldn't call it a

Well, I wouldn't call it a problem.
~gNat~

Nathanael | Mon, 03/03/2008

We are waiting for the long-promised invasion.
So are the fishes. ~ Winston Churchill

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Not completely i guess...

Tamerah | Mon, 03/03/2008

Personally I love your

Personally I love your poetry, this not least. Who cares if it's dreary, it's beautiful.

Anna | Mon, 03/03/2008

I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right. --The Book Thief

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Thank you Anna!

Tamerah | Mon, 03/03/2008

Sorry...you misunderstood me

Tamerah, your Poem is quite lovely...as I was trying to say from the beginning. I'm Extremely sorry if I confused you. Infact, the poem I am working on , at the moment, is most sad and lonely, as well.
~gNat~

Nathanael | Tue, 03/04/2008

We are waiting for the long-promised invasion.
So are the fishes. ~ Winston Churchill

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No worries I'm not confused I don't think.... Or maybe I am, its hard to tell sometimes.

Tamerah | Tue, 03/04/2008

Aahh! Now you are starting

Aahh! Now you are starting to confuse me...jk.
~gNat~

Nathanael | Tue, 03/04/2008

We are waiting for the long-promised invasion.
So are the fishes. ~ Winston Churchill

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Yes I have that effect on people
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Tamerah | Tue, 03/04/2008

awww....

Stop putting yourself down. You're making me sad. Seriously.
~gNat~

Nathanael | Wed, 03/05/2008

We are waiting for the long-promised invasion.
So are the fishes. ~ Winston Churchill

lol

I suppose I could say that I have that effect on people too but I wont =]

Tamerah | Wed, 03/05/2008

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Well, it doesn't matter anyway; because I have chosen not to be effected by any of your "effects"...jk.
~gNat~

Nathanael | Thu, 03/06/2008

We are waiting for the long-promised invasion.
So are the fishes. ~ Winston Churchill

lol

Well said!

Tamerah | Thu, 03/06/2008

Your Seeeester

Holy cow!!!
I loved this poem. It's your best yet. I'm jealous that I can't claim this one as my own. Great use of words and images.
LOVE IT!!!

Anonymous | Mon, 03/10/2008

:)

Hey, just saying I still like it :) - it's just as good now that it's posted as it was when I first read it. :) (Even if it's still a bit dark.) :)

big hugs,
me

Anonymous | Tue, 03/11/2008

Beautiful. I love the

Beautiful. I love the alliteration.

Roxanna | Sun, 04/06/2008

Thank you!

Thank you!

Tamerah | Sat, 04/19/2008

This is lovely. As far as

This is lovely. As far as being depressing...I don't think there is any problem with it. If we were never depressed, there would be no value in happiness (but neither let us dwell in misery and woe) . Delightful work.

The Brit | Mon, 10/05/2009

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