Broken Thoughts

A Poem By Tamerah // 10/5/2007

What will come of this
A wrong decision
Broken thoughts
Beating hearts
A bittersweet sensation

In the fall
The freedom lost
The knowledge gained
What is the cost
Of ignorance

Hearts crack
Lives are lost
Souls cry out
For something more

The battles rage
Ours skys go dark
Our thoughts grow cold

With glad remorse
The clouds roll in
The rains fall down
Something new begins

Oh the beauty of grace
The sun comes again
And dries our tears

There is bitter joy
In hearts won
And hearts lost

What brings us to this
Broken thoughts
beating hearts. . .



Broken thoughts - beating hearts...

This is a beautiful poem Tam - thanks for sharing it...

Keep up the good work!

Jenny | Sat, 10/06/2007

Dude Tami that was a really

Dude Tami that was a really great poem....your getting really good.

Anonymous | Sat, 10/06/2007


My thoughts are broken all the!

Emily | Mon, 10/08/2007

Wonderful...sobering, but

Wonderful...sobering, but wonderful nonetheless.

The Brit | Mon, 10/05/2009


This was beautifully done. I especially loved how you ended it. :)

Mairead | Mon, 10/05/2009


"Sweet is the love that never knew a wound, but deeper that which died and rose again." - Mother Mary Francis


simple and eloquent.... I love it!

Hannah W. | Mon, 10/05/2009


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