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I Want To Fly
I want to fly away to a mountain.
I want to soar, to the highest Place.
I want to be all that I can be.
No one to stop me.
No one to block me.
No one to get in my way,
Cause I want to be all that I can be,
Let me fly,
Let me soar, let me Run, As fast as I can
Let me climb let me drive until I get to the end.
Cause all I want to do. Is be all, that I can be.
I want to Swim in the ocean.
I want the water that’s clear.
I want the love of the Lord to fill the air.
No one to stop me
No one to block me
No one to get in my way
Cause I want to be all that I can be
I want to love u Lord God.
I want to Seek your truth
I want to know you more
I want to hear your Voice
filed under: flying away
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hm.. i was replying to the top comment. hmm... i mean on this posst not the choc milk one..
I just drank some green tea? It may look gross but it's good! EVer tried it?
~eMiLy~
I at ate a bowl of chocolate rice crispies [for dessert...even though it's night time] and I drank some chocolate milk! :o)
~eMiLy~
no i don't think so... (i'm not much for tea) unless it tastes not watery (cause tea is (most))
I like Chai tea! =)
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Nums!! sounds yumnmy... I had some chocolate milk too... =) well its powder chocolate milk stuff that you ad to milk. its really good. aslong as you dont have to much milk... I got the strawberry one like last week and it didn't tast good! I was hoping for the realy yummy strawberry milk you'd think it'd taste like but it was SOOIOO artificial! (yuk)
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I don't care for any kind of strawberry things but I LOVE CHOCOLATE MILK!!!!!!
~eMiLy~
well I realyl like berries. but that artifical stuff (blehh) i mean some might be yummy.....
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I love fruit but mainly I don't like the artifical flavor.....kinda weird!
~eMiLy~
ya my favorite berries are Raspberries! they're soo juicy adnyumy!
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I'm partcial to blackberries ♥! THEY'RE SO DELICOUS!!!! Man, I wish I had some right now!
~eMiLy~
O I know!!! they both sound really yummy!
I also think a fruit salad would be good!!
Pineapple, pears, peaches, and then berries too..
strawberries, blackberries, blueberries, and RASPBERRIES!!! ymmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
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I can't believe you actually think you can write!
My name is Rebeka if it's any of your business! Why have you posted so much? You REALLY suck at it!
For shame, Rebeka. The purpose of the comments column is for constructive criticism, not insults.
You should be ashamed, Rebeka! You just don't post stuff like that! I think you need to apologize to Velocity!!!!
~eMiLy~
that was more than slightly mean... if you had to tell her you didn't like her writing, you could have done it in a way that would help her, not tear her down!
yeah wow... im not the best writer but im not the worst!! so wut ever u say i dont really care... now if you wana tell me wut to change GO AHEAD!! but otherwise it doesnt help.
this writing is suppost to be a song anyways...
Isn't it great to know your apricotpie 'family' has your back!
And you are in no way a bad writer Velocity
Rebecca,
I see somthing wrong with your logic of thinking.
Why I love writing is because it is one of the ways I can express my love for the Lord. I can dream wierd thoughts and different things. If you read some of my writing you will see what I mean. Writing should come from what you feel inside. Writing should bring a smile to other peoples faces and place a little step of joy to someones life. And I just want to say that Velocity is an AMAZING writer! I loved this piece. I also believe what some other people commented. Apricotpie is a place for homeschooled kids so just simply practice what they like doing. No, some of it is not going to be a top-seller like some great writers work, but I don't believe you should just simply tell a person that their writing stinks. And this doesn't. Writers, have an imagination. Readers, get imagination from reading the work of writers. Velocity inspires me and my writing.
You ROCK Velocity!!!!!!!!!!!!
Maddie J-3
Yeah, what Maddie said! :0D VELOCITY ROCKS and I just think you're jealous, Rebecca!
~eMiLy~
Velocity,
We are all good at writing in our own ways. God calls us to honor him in all we do. You are most defenetly doing that with your writing. As I said before, it is not going to be a top-seller, but it is amazing because of the honor and praise you give God in your writing. You are VERY good Velocity, and I know God has BIG plans for you!
Isaiah 25:1
O Lord, You are my God; I wil exalt You, I will give thanks to YOur name; For You have worked wonders, Plans formed long ago, with perfect faithfulness.
That is one of my favorite verses and I thought I would share it with you.
Rebecca, lots of people have commented on your remark to Velocity, and who knows if you are even reading this anymore!? But I just want to let you know, Velocity is honoring God with her work. It is not going to be perfect, because no one is. I hope that you understand that some day.
Maddie J-3
Oh dear. I hope we haven't been to rough, Rebeka. It's just that Velocity is a better writer now than I was five years ago in high school - in fact, I used to be so bad that I have no grounds for criticizing anybody else's skill level :)
you can comment all you want (rebecca) but it'd be cool if you'd tell us wut to change instead of putting peoples works down and not telling them wuts the matter with them.
okay i'm done with this subject now... :)
thx everyone for support
Gawsh! You people need to chill!
Velocity: I'm kinda sorry though I don't want to lie! ;) I just think you need to grow up more in your writing, you know, like make it to where people relate to it...maybe the other apricotpie citizens do relate and I don't! I have no idea!
It would be more...more...uh.......I don't know, maybe you should be more grown up because you're making all of the eleven/tweleve year olds look bad! If you know what i'm saying! :( Sorry if I was too mean or something!
-Rebeka
Ok thanks.
yeah well i'll get better with time :)
it probly depends on how you read it.
V
Well to tell you the truth this perticular one wasn't as bad as some onthers I've read whe you first joined Apricotpie and well this was the last one I read and so I just commented on this one. (the comment that got this whole thing started)
I do think your recent posts have gotten better with time! :)
-Rebeka
dude! beautifully Put!
Long Live The lords and masters of the Sith !