When We're Together

Submitted by Libby on Thu, 10/12/2017 - 05:18

When we’re together smiles win the day
The sun’s shining bright, clouds all blown away.

When we’re together things really get Fryed,
White Converse and brown ones sit right side by side.

When we’re together we laugh at our jokes
That really aren’t good, still we laugh til we croak.

When we’re together, it’s hard to describe.
You always create such a friendly vibe.

When we’re together, I love you so much.
I don’t think there’s anyone with your special touch.

My girl, do you know how much we’ve gone through?
And none of it would’ve happened if I’d not met you.

Author's age when written

This poem is for my best friend. There's a couple inside jokes, but I hope y'all like it. Criticism is always welcome. I feel like the rhythm is not the best.


"things really get Fryed"... I get that one. ;)

"The idea that we should approach science without a philosophy is itself a philosophy... and a bad one, because it is self-refuting." -- Dr. Jason Lisle

Aww I love this! Best friend inside jokes are awesome. :) I like the rhythm and rhyme. :) simple and sweet. Well done!

I don’t thrive off of chaos: chaos thrives off of me.